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A fallen angel crying in the night
The cold leafs dying, tribute to the fright.
Silence raining in the shiny moon,
Her tears falling, hit the ground to soon.

Black hair weaving in the icy wind
Just a shadow, vanishing and limp.
Unheard water raises from the ground
Screaming silence gives birth to the sound.

From the heavens descend only flies
Stars of darkness, when an angel dies.
©2008-2009 ~E-Nigma-El
:icone-nigma-el:

Author's Comments

A little more...abstract(?) poem than the usual ones. It's inspired by a new friend of mine (or maybe by her music? mh...maybe both). Well, anyway...


P.S.: Yes, I'm still alive and existing.

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:iconthorvga:
Auch wenn ich sicher nicht den ganzen Sinn des Gedichtes verstehe habe ich es immerhin sprachlich fast alles verstanden :D
Und es klingt sehr interessant, muss ich gestehen.

Schönes Gedicht. Top.

--
My english is awful.
Please forgive me.
:icondeleilasenpei:
sehr sehr schön... =) zwar kurz, aber inhaltlich hat es sehr viel =)
ich kann mir die szene gut vorstellen...
:iconchikara-oji:
It's sad and deep it is...

--
Chikara-chan, Hero of Winds!
力-ちゃん, 風の英雄!
¡Chikara-chan! ¡héroe de vientos!
Chikara-chan, Tuulten Sankari!

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August 6, 2008
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